da ich das spiel noch nicht gespielt habe und selber auch noch nicht besitze (warte eben auf meine KS version), weiß ich nicht wie weit die sachen schon in der de version drin sind bzw. wie klar sie in der en version sind, trotzdem hier mal paar sachen die ich gefunden habe (hab versucht vorallem konkrete änderungsvorschläge und nicht nur fragen rauszupciken...)
allgemein noch eine frage/bitte: da es ja schon ein pdf mit hinweisen zu den karten gibt, könnte man ja eventuell einige hinweise gleich mit in die deutsche formulierungen auf den karten packen...
wut beim soldat:
was ich bei KS gefunden hab:
If you're revising the rulebook, you may want to explicitly state that rage is placed (for free) along with a rage-based ability to power it up and then discarded with the rest of played cards.
und auf bgg:
Rage: You should also mention that you can play a card as Rage at anytime during the HC and never during the DC (as that's only mentioned under Threat in the manual).
im deutschen regelnbuch steht schon dass es keine AP kostet wut auszuspielen, aber hab auf anhieb nicht gefunden, dass die wutkarten mit abgelegt werden
brigand:
was ich von bgg hab:
One with the Dark: I think the last sentence should be "...during the Hero Deck Phase." I assume this doesn't allow you to break the 1 Action/HC rule.
Dirty Tactics: How long is does the target have their movement reduced by half for? Is there any way to remember that the enemy moves at 1/2 speed?
Shadowslip: I think the last sentence should be "...during the Hero Deck Phase."
schütze:
Arrow: You may want to say that the Quiver dictates the maximum Ammo cards allowed.
Through a Needle's Eye: For consistency "..allows the Archer to discard a single ammo card from her quiver.."
Tumble: For Blink, the Apprentice can move "up to 3 squares" Here it just says, "move 3" meaning that she is forced to move all 3 squares.
magier:
Research: Is this 1d10 reroll per Hero, or just 1 collective reroll.
Chaotic Overflow: If attacking only 1 target (or just doing 2 or more damage to a single target). Do you make only 1 attack roll to do all of the damage? Or do you do 1 attack roll per damage? Can you choose?
acolyte:
Armor of Faith: "...for every Faith the Acolyte spends"
The Acolyte doesn't spend faith, it should most likely read, "...for every Faith the Acolyte has." (Also, I didn't realize this gave a buff to every hero on the tile, may want to edit the card text like you did for Hand of the Father)
Last Rites: May want to mention that the Acolyte still needs LoS to the center square (because of the various questions that have arisen about it). Also "This can greatly increase the range of this spell at the cost of it hitting fewer targets." Is that just because you need to play a Hustle card instead of a Faith card? It seems a little unnecessary.
Hand of the Father: "A minimum of 1 Hero will always be affected because of the Acolyte's base Faith of 1." Shouldn't this be, "A minimum of 2 Heroes will always be affected because of the Acolyte's base Faith of 1 and the 1 Faith supplied by this card."
Consuming Fire: "For every Faith over 1, the DoT lasts another round." Isn't this the same thing as saying "The DoT lasts 1 round per Faith", which to me is more clear.
Blessings of the Dawn: I'd suggest editing the card text for this card too, specially stating that it targets all heroes.
Chant of the Morning: Since you changed the text on Hand of the Father, did you mean to change it here too (since they were worded exactly the same)? Currently, "Clears all status effects on 1 Hero. +1 Hero per Faith." This means that with no other cards, 3 Heroes will always be cleansed (1 base from the card, +1 base Faith, +1 Faith from this card).
Dirge of Twilight: More a comment about the Stunned Status Effect, since status effects are normally resolved during Hero Refresh, does Stunned stay with the Captain until its next Activation? (this sounds more like Prone)
allgemein bei ongoing:
Ongoing: "Cards labeled as Ongoing stay out in the Refresh Phase..."
I assume this text should be "Cards labeled as Ongoing may stay out in the Hero Deck Phase." You may also want to add a sentence that states you can choose to remove ongoing effects during the Hero Deck Phase before you reduce Threat.
BGG Quelle:
www.boardgamegeek.com/thread/1144973/pot...o-deck-reference-rev